Re: moon whisper
crossed spokes...welcome to The Maelstrom...This is a very visual Haiku...like the way you link sun and moon with the river......one very minor nit...you seem to have eight syllables in the second...
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welcome to the maelstrom, crossed spokes!!enjoyed the images immensely ... and will look forward to more ..."For long you live and high you fly, and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry, and all...
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thank you guys and gals! What a nice feeling...yes soulease I do believe you are right - varying can be tricky as far as the syllables go...and mona I'm glad I was able to stir your imagination...
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